This Girl

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This is a story
Of a girl, so depressed
A girl and her razor
A girl of only twelve

She had not one friend
To help her through this pain
To her this was the end
Her life she took, at the end of this day

At school she was teased
Of her looks and her scars
Emo the kids chanted
This chanting broke her heart

The razor was her escape
When all she did was cry
It all started with her rape
That made her childhood fly on by

Of all people it was her dad
That took her innocence away
He made this girl so sad
That cold night in mid May

Her mum, she never cared
She knew all about it
Tell the police, if she dared
She said that she imagined it

This girl of only twelve
Knew that her life was already over
She sold her life to the devil
And her dad that night wasn\'t sober

Her dad well he raped her
Again and again
Her mother was watching
Her dad commit his sin

She begged her dad to stop
But he just kept going
Pleading with her mother
But she ignored her daughter not knowing

That later that night
This girl, she sat all alone
She knew that this was right
This girl was so unknown

She sat there with that razor
To scared to even cry
The fear she has won\'t stop her
For tonight she has to die

She takes her last razor
And presses it against her wrist
The pain is now leaving her
This girl\'s pain will not persist

Lying there so peaceful
On her bedroom floor
Her heart beat slowly ceases
When there was a knock at her door

Her mother walks in
And sees her daughter on the floor
What have I done she thinks
When she rushes through that door

I have killed my own daughter
She is thinking to herself
She sees the note sitting beside her
The reason for her daughter's death

Dear mum
This note reads
Please don\'t blame yourself
It\'s not like you cared anyway
You never cared about anyone but yourself

I left this world the same way
As I entered, you see
This is your price to pay
For yours and dads evil deeds

I looked up to you
For almost all my life
Love me, is all I wanted from you
You couldn\'t so I picked up my knife

Every week I cut deeper
Because I knew you never cared
I'm off to see the grim reaper
My pain I'm off to share

Tell dad that I hate him
And I did this because of you both
My death was because of your sin
Before that I loved you the most

No need to tell my friends
Because I never had many
No-one really cared about me
Really I didn\'t have any

I just want to say one more thing
Before I sign with goodbye
That I hate you, you bi(t)ch
Welcome to my life

I hope now you understand
Why I left this world tonight
My dad was an evil man
And my mum she was a lie

Goodbye and good riddance
I will see you in hell
You used up your last chance
Goodbye, cya, farewell