Eternally Trapped

by Jessica   Sep 15, 2006


Slowly creeping in, taking over innocent souls
Suffocating in never ending pain, silently dying
Endlessly stabbing soft hearts, unhealed holes
Internally debating if I should just stop trying..

Falling in deeper, eternally trapped in the dark
Reaching up for a hand, but left struggling all alone
Choices unwisely made, to deaths door I embark
Heading steadily through steel gates of the unknown..

Bony fingers followed by ebony wings grasp me
Pulling me away from love, from those who care
No longer fighting or having the strength to disagree
The connection between life and death slowly tears..

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  • 17 years ago

    by LovingAnnabelle

    Wow this is a really good poem! All of your poems have so much emotion into them that they make you want to keep reading them~!
    You have such a great talent!
    Nice Job~Keep up the good work!
    5/5 =D

  • 17 years ago

    by ^_^GuitarGal

    You are a great writer. It amuses me to see how well you write for your age. Well age ain't a barrier is it. Anyways, keep up the great work. I bet you'd come up as a great poet in life!

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    I've read this on your other account so same thing goes. Wonderful!
    5/5 God Bless!

    ~*Tay*~

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥*3 simple words*♥

    I love this poem... your a great writer

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    A good poem. very imaginative, and deep.

    but it seems (from what ive read) that you mainly stick to an abab cdcd etc rhyme scheme..

    this is a good, well very good poem, but i think you should try to break out f this style. =]

    Still-5|5-((im not gonna down grade the poem jus cause its like most of your others.))

    x.x:Lauren

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