The 4th stanza brought a tear to my heart . Something that is inevitable and none of us can run from .

The ending was one of pure beauty .

You've taken the 'wind' topic and created an amazing piece, Bill .

Bill what an incredible love story and yet so sad that being alone is inevetible yet it makes me crave that one that will miss me when I am gone, I stand in awe of this and hope the woman that it was written for appreciates the outpouring of emotion.
Tim

Your love poetry is always so mesmerising. I love it!! Great piece Bill, you never cease to impress this sensitive heart of mine!

The hammer winds of winter blow cold
Chilling the lost and lonely to the bone
I will lay with you as we grow old
Warming you as we together moan

That was definatly going to be our favorite part until we both read the ending!! All in all this was a beautifully written poem! I loved your descriptions and the images you portray to your readers! Truly a pleasure to read another one of Bill's masterpieces!
Kristy and Chelsey
-Krissey

To live, and to die together.. Love is an amazing thing.. How I envy you sometimes.. This is beautiful, and true.. as long as the wind of change is expected, we can find a way to enjoy every waking moment.. 5/5 xx

Bill what a wonderful poem. The feelings of love you feel for your wife shout from the page. Excellent job! Take Care Cindy