by locky
Very sad and very good great poem 5/5 |
by Brittany C
Great poem. 5/5 I can feel the emotions. Keep up the good work. |
by Naima
Wow, this is good! I've felt this way about my father as well, after my parents divorced... great poem! |
by Jenni
Aww this poem is so sad. if this is true then i am so sorry. it is such a wonderfully written poem and the story makes me want to reach out and hug you. great job. 5/5 |
Wow.. i really LOVE LOVE this poem.. i didnt want it to end.. lol.. the flow was soo wonderful making it a very easy and enjoyable read.. the rhymes were great and didnt seem forced at all.. and I LOVE the last stanza.. its optimistic which was very unexpected.. and i totally understand how your feeling.. kind of.. i havent seen my dad in like 5 years but stil.. even when i did it was like with you..very rarely.. |
by amoxi
Wow...this poems is amazing and heart wrenching, i know what its like not to have a father growing up, i loved this poem you are a great writer keep em comin |
This poem is so powerful!! i absoutely loved it! your so talented hun. |
by Wallace
Very nice, i really enjoyed this, loved the start, loved the ending good job. |
Ugh, i know EXACTLY what youre talking about. |
by maggielou
This is sad but i like it. very well written. |