Comments : Remember?

  • 17 years ago

    by locky

    Very sad and very good great poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. 5/5 I can feel the emotions. Keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Naima

    Wow, this is good! I've felt this way about my father as well, after my parents divorced... great poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Aww this poem is so sad. if this is true then i am so sorry. it is such a wonderfully written poem and the story makes me want to reach out and hug you. great job. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. i really LOVE LOVE this poem.. i didnt want it to end.. lol.. the flow was soo wonderful making it a very easy and enjoyable read.. the rhymes were great and didnt seem forced at all.. and I LOVE the last stanza.. its optimistic which was very unexpected.. and i totally understand how your feeling.. kind of.. i havent seen my dad in like 5 years but stil.. even when i did it was like with you..very rarely..

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    Wow...this poems is amazing and heart wrenching, i know what its like not to have a father growing up, i loved this poem you are a great writer keep em comin

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    This poem is so powerful!! i absoutely loved it! your so talented hun.
    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very nice, i really enjoyed this, loved the start, loved the ending good job.

    PS. Plz rate and comment on my poems

  • 17 years ago

    by ï»»Shorrtiiï»»

    Ugh, i know EXACTLY what youre talking about.
    GREAT poem!
    Same thing happened to me, except after 5..
    i never saw him again.
    It must be harder seeing him move on then not knowing a thing about it.
    =] great poem.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by maggielou

    This is sad but i like it. very well written.