Goodbye

by argueing with the rain   Sep 15, 2006


One last call to make
gotta do it for your sake
gotta say good-bye
i just cant live the lie
so lost, confused, and sad
how did it ever get this bad?
the more days that go bye
I've finally gone insane
been driven there by all this pain
the end is near
and i refuse to shed a tear
good-bye my dear friend
we will be together in the end
sweet memories will remain
and soon replace all the pain
good-bye and goodnight
I'm giving up the fight

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  • 17 years ago

    by Alesia

    Aww....that's really sad....

  • 17 years ago

    by Nicole

    5/5. so sad and it leaves alot to interpretation however there is an obvious interpretation. well done this was well written.

  • 17 years ago

    by Alesia

    I love your writing style

  • 18 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    I liked this poem.
    I gave a five.
    Excellent.
    Dark.
    Tip: Maybe if you made the poem skip lines it won't look like one big mass ;/.

    Take care,
    N-G-C-S.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tenisha

    I loved it it was a good way to express your emotions and i love that i can feel the emotions without u saying them good work very unique

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