by Jenni Marie
Wow, i really liked this, and no you're not the only one to go through it lol. |
by Krzysztof J
Im going thru this right now, but with a girl, im sorry that mine are soo sad but i cant change how i feel that im losing her its never easy, she writes poems on here too i wish she would read mine. I loved yours, i can relate so thank you 5/5 head up kiddo it aint that bad ;) |
by alana
Yeah i think most of us no what you are going threw.. it needa a lil work bu you got you rpoint accross like you wanted to |
by *Charisma*
I think that you have some feelings you really try to let out, and that's great in poetry. My suggestion is to not force it as much. let it flow a little more...But good job and keep on going! |