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by SEAN Sep 16, 2006 category : Love, romance / desired love
Cast across a violent skyline the waves and stars erupt in the most brilliant display of design her eyes hypnotic begin to corrupt what is her name perfectly placed scarlet lips iterate such sadness and tragedy but i couldn\'t think in such heat and collapsed in naive apathy what does she see the moons radiance exposes the intensity in her eyes as waves crash against each powerful word in her sorrowful reprise where her heart lay submerged and intertwined between the essence and desire exiled as a puppet a harlequin a pariah set amid st a serene dawn the mourning has begun the tide dictates a solemn elegy somber woes the girl once loved
by Sara
Wow, that was really well written. I wish I could write like that.
by Leah
*bravo* sigh... i wish i could write like you.. xox leah