by shattered and broken Sep 16, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Destroy me fast, do it please, leave me here on my knees |
I love this! its exactly what im feeling right now. keep up the good work! 5/5 |
by Shatter
Wow. very powerful i love this. |
This is exactly like my life right now! it hurts so f---ing bad, you put it into words better than i ever could. awsome, dude. |
OMG this poem was awesome and the rhyming was perfect! I wanted to tell you thank you for rating and commenting on my poem. I am gonna have to seriously read more of your work cuz i fell absolutely in love with this poem. Great use of words. Thanks again, take care. |