Hey,
sorry i haven't commented or voted on any of your poems in a long time (computer probs)but anyways...your poems are changing very fast you are just getting better and better from every word you put on the page(and i REALLY mean that!!!!)....i know how hard it is tolose grandparents but remember now that there gone they can always watching over you now everyday for the rest of your life now they are your guardian angel...your poem was very beatiful 5/5...keep it up :)
auna

Ok this isen't really a comment on your poem but i just read your comment on my poem about suicide.. you made me go into tears i swear on every one i love that i will not leave if i'm helping some one in some way by staying...don't ever be as dumb as me and just live life and be happy:) i'm trying to do that and maybe just maybe one day it will happen :)
your friend,
auna

Oh well if sending me an email didn't work why don't you just add me if you have hotmail.....here is mine aunabeth@hotmail.com:)...hope it works this time

I love this poem, keep up the good work. and plz let me know when you write some news poems okay. shanik