Memories

by Letty   Sep 16, 2006


By 2006 By Letrice Hopkins

Most days I spend reminiscing
about my past.
The good old times,
the happy times, the bad times
and the sad.
I cry most times from the visions
my memories bring.
Because I see what was once
in the dark is now in the light to me.
I don't want to hate anyone
because hatred is so wrong. But
How can I go on normally
knowing what he.
Or she has done.

Seeing the affects they had on me,
as in my heart, mind, and soul.
Gives me the answers
that I've been searching for,
to the Question:
Why is my heart so cold?
They made me this way.
Truthfully if they hadn't abused
my love, I would be a better person today.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    I like the story and i feel that it comes to ur heart,, but i dont like the way u write,,,maybe because this a new style so i truly appreciate it, honestly i like the message it was so great. job well done thanks

  • 18 years ago

    by John (Mr. Whuppy)

    Letty im sure your a better person than you make out to be

    although to me your poem is not poetry but more a statement or maybe notes for a speech (I only say this because I dont understand your style of writing and thats only because im an old man and am ignorant when it comes to modern styles of poetry)
    You see I was educated here in England the old fashioned way and was taught and it was drummed into our brains that poetry should rhyme
    but that doesnt mean that the things you write are not good especially when you convey the message so well and with such feeling so well done on a terific heart rending piece of work

    5/5
    John

    PS I bet you think im strange lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, another great job by you, i really liked this poem, you are great