by Layla Sep 16, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
You see her every day |
Excellently written . |
Wow. i really liked this one. Its very deep and very good. its sad but the most beautiful things are the deepest... |
by Taylor Lyn
Very emotional and sad poem, I like it. You don't always have to rhyme though, that's a trap that people have often. I enjoyed it though, 5/5 |
by donna
A very sad emotional poem, but excellently written.. It flowed really well.. well done 5/5 xx |
by Jessica
Omg, that was soo sad! Awh, omg, I'm crying.. That is horrible.. Wow, that really makes me feel guilty and it wasn't even me.. It shows what a great poem can do huh? Anyway, the flow was good, the emotion was clear and the descriptions great.. Nicely done! 5/5 |