Comments : Distanced Voices

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Exellent jo once again, you are new to this site, but yet you have better poems than most. great job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    Amazing deep. i lov it. i like ur taste. u well wrote it. keep writing:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Omg, that was soo sad! Awh, omg, I'm crying.. That is horrible.. Wow, that really makes me feel guilty and it wasn't even me.. It shows what a great poem can do huh? Anyway, the flow was good, the emotion was clear and the descriptions great.. Nicely done! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by donna

    A very sad emotional poem, but excellently written.. It flowed really well.. well done 5/5 xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Taylor Lyn

    Very emotional and sad poem, I like it. You don't always have to rhyme though, that's a trap that people have often. I enjoyed it though, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ~SweetlyBroken~

    Wow. i really liked this one. Its very deep and very good. its sad but the most beautiful things are the deepest...

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Excellently written .
    It was full of emotion and just cries out at the reader . Sends out a message(:
    Very nicely done .

    ..ღ__MiNDYY