Kim A very well written poem your choice of words and imagery is excemplary I would love to give a complete critique of this poem but I find myself not wnating to change anything, the only thing I can say is my own preference but I find struggling with poems that have ryming stanzas mixed with free form but I think this may be just me. Again a very well done piece.
Tim

A very well written piece; the descriptions and imager ywere amazing. However, the only thing I would suggest is to put quotation marks on the lines where someone or something is speaking. Like
"Dance with me my young one,"
Whispered the warm inviting wind.

And add some punctuation. It just makes it easier to read and adds an effect :)

Haunting and melodic....I love this. Great job.

A wonderful, exquisitely done piece Kim, superlative write and superb work!!!

Superb!! I really enjoyed this piece. Your words are wonderfully crafted, imagery is superb and the overall feel of the poem was cold and chilling. Congratulations to you on this outstanding piece!!!