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by jordynn Sep 16, 2006 category : Miscellaneous / Misc. poems
Save my heart and stop my breath; slit my wrists and wait for death. while i wait lying here; all my stars will appear. close my eyes watch them tear; take away all my fear. take my heart from beneath my chest; watch me take the eternal test. for you I'll wait on the other side; until the day you've withered and died. my thoughts are racing, my pulse is low; i can feel the blood no longer flow. I'm sorry for leaving, so close so soon; but my life will stay, in these walls in this room.
by X2892
Very good poem 5/5
by Simple Sensation
Wow. Powerful poem. I liked the rhyming oif this one. And the flow was good. Your good at writing poems! Keep them up! xx
by NiaPooh
Wowzir!!!! thaz gooooood!!!!