You have a talent for combining haunting symbols with beautiful prose, to create a vivid masterpiece. I love it.

I love the abstract feeling of this poem, all the while conveying a sense of reality. Dream-like and haunting with amazing images. This is a wonderful write!

Thank-you for your comments ^_^ Sometimes I prefer freeverse and not rhyming, it depends on the mood I'm in lol, you are a talented writer of this style. I love reading your poems to look at your technique as well as enchanting poetry.

Creative yet again... This a very illusive piece. You must write about your dreams more often, the imagery is superb. I particularly liked this stanza:

"I only dream in color
When I'm stoned
A strange thing to say claims
The priest confessing
His sins to me
As if I give a damn"