by ebony Sep 16, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
cyber love
Why is it they all must leave? |
by Kaila
The rhyming seemed forced...maybe if you used more sophisticated words it wouldn't sound like that...or even a bigger word and a smaller one...other then that great job! |
by kelly
Thats petty good and about true |
by Tiffany
Hey!!! |