Wow, absolutely wonderful! Great use of words too! I loved the delicate way you used to describe such a weak thing as a teardrop.Amazing work on this, my friend.Keep it up!5/5
Best wishes,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

Wow, good poem.. with great ending..

The tears of a clown

No one knows what pain heartache can cause unless they have been there and you obviously have

Very well written from the heart

5/5
John

Oh my god. So powerful and- aww, I just wanna cry! Excellent Job on this one. definite 5.

This poem really flowed with outstanding imagery and content

Wow that was truly amazing...I never knew someone could describe a tear drop with such detail...5/5!

That is beautifully written and I think it was a very unique style of writing. A little sad but showed true feeling and I enjoyed the piece very much

Wonderfully writen and flowed great i loved this poem...it was so good! nice job 5/5

~Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ~

Holy cow. I have nothing to say sweetie. this was BEAUTIFUL. I am COMPLETELY speechless. i just wow i LOVED LOVED IT!!!! OMGGGG =D wow ok sorry. i'll stop now..
-whispers, WOW- hehe

Ooh. i liked how you expressed the point of how much you were crying and how much you were hurt, and how you kept on repeating "remember my tears". 5/5

Woah!! That is amazing! Very powerful. Your description and how you fit your words together is beautiful. Keep up the great work!
Tammie xo

Jessy, I did love this one, it was really good. creative and imagery was awesome
xxxx

Beautiful imagery!

Awh! Jessy! This was so sad!!.. I hope you're alright. I be here if you need me, kay?

Very nicely done though. I loved all the words you chose for this piece. They were perfect. I wouldn't change a thing. Keep it up! Ily. 5/5

Natalie``

Thankz for participating in my contest!

This is very well written! Sad poem, but you really captured the right words to bring the poem to life.

I really love this poem and great ending!

This is so very poetic, but the emotion makes you forget and just feel.I like the repitition-it adds impact and meaning.The emotion of this piece is what stands out though.

Gary Jurechka

I like the layout, and love the title!! but i also think there is no mistakes in it! whether this is because you never made any, or because people were kind enough to tell you and then say like it is good any-way although there is only two mistakes!!

This is a wonderful poem, very well written! Good choice of words.
Good job 5/5