Comments : She Wants..

  • 18 years ago

    by Mark

    Lol if I could find a girl like this I MIGHT be happy .. but I doubt I'll be able to find one I can be with.. anyway I really liked this poem .. good job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by squishy

    Nice its all true lol

  • 18 years ago

    by .x.HauNt.x.Me.x.

    Wow this is really well writen
    its awesome
    thanks for commenting on my poem
    :) xoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    *true* great job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Brooke Amity

    All of your work is brilliiant!
    You ask for constructive criticsm but i cant find any to give! (i say this pretending i am actually qualified to gie constuctive critism lol)
    You are in my favourites!!
    ..xx