I will have my Revenge, (this one loz)

by Esther   Sep 16, 2006


You hurt me,
You made me look a fool,
But there is a fee,
For I am no tool,

I will have my revenge,
It will be sweet for me,
If you don't believe me...
Tough for you will see.

I will rip you apart,
Chew you up,
Then when I'm done,
I will begin my revenge,

I will not get mad,
I will not get even,
I will simply get my revenge,

I will have my revenge,
If you don't believe me..
Tough you will see!
I will have my revenge!

thanks loz 4 reading this n commenting!

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow! it sounds lik pure hate in this one!! awsome poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Audrey

    Umm...... I take it you were angry. Very angry. The poem was good in it expressed what you meant it to. The words jumped off the screen and crackled in fire.

  • 18 years ago

    by lauracampbell

    Hahaha lol , idiot proofed for me :p good poem! ya reli gettin nak 4 this

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Ooo. Venting poem? Very good if it was. I've done a few myself. (In explicit of course. =P ) I thought the flow was alright, and not too bad, and I liked the anger. =) Great write. 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, this one was so strong

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