Seems like a venting of anger.....this one hit its mark

Wow, this one was so strong

Ooo. Venting poem? Very good if it was. I've done a few myself. (In explicit of course. =P ) I thought the flow was alright, and not too bad, and I liked the anger. =) Great write. 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Hahaha lol , idiot proofed for me :p good poem! ya reli gettin nak 4 this

Umm...... I take it you were angry. Very angry. The poem was good in it expressed what you meant it to. The words jumped off the screen and crackled in fire.

Wow! it sounds lik pure hate in this one!! awsome poem!