by *Charisma*
Gave it a five because it had some really great thoughts and word use. but i must admit, i think the ending isn't as conclusive as I'd like. I wish there's was one more stanza to end it. Jpoet* |
Deep poem, with great word choice. And, also I like it. 5/5. |
by Gem
I liked this, i could have raised so many interpretation from within the words.. |