Comments : Without A Trace

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Good poem. I really liked it. One suggestion, although the word crimson is very descriptive you use it a lot. Maybe try to find a synonym for it. Just a suggestion. Jpoet*

  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Wow great way to discribe snow and spring intertwined. it has such an easy feeling or dead and alive. great work.