by Layla
Aww! so sweet and perfect. |
This poem is eloquently written with beautiful and sensual imagery, and with a romantic happy ending I quite honestly enjoyed every line |
by Marcus
This poem was genius...I loved the beautiful descriptions and images it generated in my mind! |
Great job beautifully written loved it 5/5 from me |
Holy crap, totally awesome. |
Wonderful write, sweet and sensual, great work Jessy!!! |
by Misstress
Sweeeet.. |
Awww... so sweet, I enjoyed reading it, it makes me want to love even more ^_^ 5/5 *hugs* |
by Tammie
Everything about this is perfect. So sweet. You have really good endings. Keep up the great work. =] 5/5 |
by Biscuit
I enjoyed this very much. its not just one of the usual love poems, theres a hiddendepth to this which makes it very original. The language you use is also excellent, there are no uneccesary words; your style is inspirational. |
by Jenni Marie
I loved the imagery in this...astounding! |