by Marcus Sep 16, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
*I wrote this off the top of the head I don't normally write about nature but I wanted to try it |
This was very good for your first try at a nature poem. Nice work, truly. |
by BlueDreams
Oh my...how wonder of nature...simply but beautiful poem ever....i enjoyed my visit on your stuff,... have a great day, take care. |
by Sweet lig
Wow its great, actually i never write poet about nature well i wanna try it.. i like the message of this poem it written well great job5/5 |
by Robie Lincer
This is awsome! the flow alone is worth 5/5 the strucure 5/5 and the way you wrote your word another 5/5 |
by Tammie
Nice write. It can be hard sometimes to write about nature. I can never get the words out right. But i really like this. The imagery was great and a nice flow. Good job. =] 5/5 |