Awwh, I love the last linee! It's awesome! The flow worked well, and the imagery that was created was beautiful.. Nicely done! 5/5

Nice write. It can be hard sometimes to write about nature. I can never get the words out right. But i really like this. The imagery was great and a nice flow. Good job. =] 5/5

This is awsome! the flow alone is worth 5/5 the strucure 5/5 and the way you wrote your word another 5/5

awsome!

Wow its great, actually i never write poet about nature well i wanna try it.. i like the message of this poem it written well great job5/5

Oh my...how wonder of nature...simply but beautiful poem ever....i enjoyed my visit on your stuff,... have a great day, take care.

This was very good for your first try at a nature poem. Nice work, truly.