Smile [A Wordless Conversation]

by Twisted Heart   Sep 16, 2006


You smiled at me and I smiled back
No words were spoken to each other
But just that simple exchange in time
Caused my heart to flutter.

A simple notion, you gave to me
That day as I looked back
You made me think I was okay
There by the subway tracks.

As I traveled to work that day
It played within my mind
It lifted up my sinking spirits
Because it was so genuine.

That smile stayed with me all day long
A stranger's simple action
Though not a word was said to me
It caused a sweet reaction.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    Wonderful, again. A bit choppy at first, but the last stanza makes up for it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    That smile stayed with me all day long
    A stranger's simple action
    Though not a word was said to me
    It caused a sweet reaction.

    ^ thats m fav stanza!!!!!

    great poem

    Narc xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by SHYSTY23KO

    Love this one too. your such a great writer! and this poem is so cute, i kno how it is!

  • 17 years ago

    by Your Best Mistake Your Perfect Failure

    Love the poem.. you are so descriptive.. good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    Oh wow. i love this poem. its amazing!! you have a great tallent. :D

    That smile stayed with me all day long
    A stranger's simple action
    Though not a word was said to me
    It caused a sweet reaction.

    ^that stanza is amazing!!! i love it.

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