When your mind wanders.

by SaveMe?   Sep 16, 2006


When your mind wanders
Away through the dark
Just cry slowly
She'll pull you apart

Have you ever felt
So far away
Even your closet friend
Cant hear what you say

They don't take opinion
Objection or fright
No-ones experienced
What happened at night

Sick up the food
They forced you to eat
Don't follow the rules
Hear the stone heart beat

Jump at every creek
In this old house and it stairs
The knife is at your throat
No good'll come from prays

Even Gods forgotten you
Whom or whatever he may be
No cry for help will be recalled
They'll bury you in the sea

Take the hope I kept
And keep it for your own
Nothing is more beautiful
Than just skin and bones

No one knows this little girl
The one who once had friends
She used to be miss popular
On poisons she now depends

She used to be the captain
Of every after school team
She used to be so perfect
In her eyes, happiness would gleam

Now her eyes are dull
But with a beautiful blue of hurt
Everyone just treats her
Like a pretty piece of dirt

Her cheeks are shallow
Her face is white
Her gut is empty
Her heart filled with spite

Kill the girl inside
Why? Her lips are already blue
She was no loss to anyone
Most especially you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Burn It Baby. ! .

    W...w....w....wahey!
    Im glad you still have my little red jelly band thing:))
    I bet you don't even come on here anymore!
    Lol, haven't talked to you in a while actually!
    Bbbbubye!
    xxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by shae r

    Hey there gawjuz!
    many thanks for your comment it made my day!
    as for this poem.. it hit me hard as it sadly reminds me of myself! beautifully written! 5/5
    you've got amazing talent!
    much love
    Shae Radford ღ

  • 18 years ago

    by John (Mr. Whuppy)

    Ve looked at some of your poems after reading your comments on writing poetry forum/P&Q because of your statement "i wish i could write like that" well let me tell you can write like that maybe you just need to try a different subject matter but anyway im rating this one as a 5/5
    regards
    john

  • 18 years ago

    by Burn It Baby. ! .

    Good poem.
    5/5.

    :/

  • 18 years ago

    by eternalxxpromise

    Whoa this poems awesome. good work dude. i can totally relate to this.
    -steph