Comments : When your mind wanders.

  • 18 years ago

    by Coral

    This a great poem spoken so truthfully

  • 18 years ago

    by eternalxxpromise

    Whoa this poems awesome. good work dude. i can totally relate to this.
    -steph

  • 18 years ago

    by Burn It Baby. ! .

    Good poem.
    5/5.

    :/

  • 18 years ago

    by John (Mr. Whuppy)

    Ve looked at some of your poems after reading your comments on writing poetry forum/P&Q because of your statement "i wish i could write like that" well let me tell you can write like that maybe you just need to try a different subject matter but anyway im rating this one as a 5/5
    regards
    john

  • 18 years ago

    by shae r

    Hey there gawjuz!
    many thanks for your comment it made my day!
    as for this poem.. it hit me hard as it sadly reminds me of myself! beautifully written! 5/5
    you've got amazing talent!
    much love
    Shae Radford ღ

  • 18 years ago

    by Burn It Baby. ! .

    W...w....w....wahey!
    Im glad you still have my little red jelly band thing:))
    I bet you don't even come on here anymore!
    Lol, haven't talked to you in a while actually!
    Bbbbubye!
    xxxxxxx