by Biscuit Sep 16, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
Beneath the tree, I gaze into its midst |
by Connie
I really enjoyed this poem ~ the topic and the way in which you wrote it. Great Job! |
by Connie
I really enjoyed this! The title got me very interested, and I never lost interest after that! The title of a poem is important to me ~ I believe you nailed this one! |
Very well penned peice of work!!...Filled with clear imagery supprted by good choice of words...sad yet beautiful! |
Hi. i was just wondering, you commented on one of my poems -paper wings- a while back. saying i needed to add more of an impact for the ending. i recently added 2 more stanzas(today actually and i was wondering if you could read it and tell me if you think it workd better. if you do it is much much appreciated. =] |
Such a beautiful poem hun Wonderful writing =] 5/5 |