Grea poem , very well written

Lovely poem!
Liked the emotion
Loved the Last Stanza
Keep it up
And
Keep smiling

Much Love
-*-DK-*-

Hey. Long time no stop-by I know, but here I am! lol. Anyway, thought I'd repay a little comment that I owe you whilest saying hi; see, I'm killing two birds with one stone...Sept I don't kill so much, so maybe I'm just torturing them. lol jk. But anyway, honestly, this isn't the best work I've seen from you, but I'm glad to see that you're still at it :). I don't know if it was deliberate or not, but you have breaks in your words where apostrophe's should be, and I actually think it's kind of cool. Kind of symbolizes your seperation. Is that what you meant to do? If so, yay! lol if not, happy accident and yay anyway! :P. anyway, I should be on my way. talk to you later. Keep writing, and I'll see what I can do with my free time aswell he he. Byes for now. -Stefhy-

Wow. this is really good! i love your style! another piece of great work :P

haha you totally get my poems, thanks dude (i dunno why, i just need to call someone dude)

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Short and sweet and to the point
nice work

Awe, this is a sweet poem. I reminds me of one of my favorites pairings... Keep up your amazingness.

5/5 Love is so complicating and it hurts a lot when it's gone.

This is exactly this situation with my ex and i.. i know exactly where you are coming from... very good.. 5/5

>.>...i'V3 B33N TH3R3
iTZ SAD..PAiNFUL..&& H3ART BR0K3N
3SP3CiALLY W3N Y0 F33LiNGZ N3VA FAD3D AWAi
BUT H3i [F0RGiV3, F0RG3T && M0V3 0N!]
5/5

Great work wit it..

I'm sorry, but I didn't really like this piece at all, I found it dull and uneventful. There didn't seem to be any REAL emotion within it, and was a little too simple and basic, I think. Once again, sorry, but this is how I feel.

Brad