Dream

This is very sweet, I think you should try to use a wider variety of words, and maybe use 'day' less because each subsequent time the same word is used it often loses it's meaning which then detracts from the piece. Nice job :)

Hey, kresten waz up noten much u i really like this poem it tells what almost every gurl thinks about the man she loves when shes young. i really like this so i think it is about a perfect 10/10 so keep up the great work kresten.

Oh and thx for the addvice u wrote to me about my crush, u were right he asked me out to day and befor i could say YES my phone went dead. and i tryed to call back but he wouldn't anwser. i think he might be mad at me what do u think? Hes in my grade and 2morrow i'm gonna have to face him and i know he wont listen to me. so what sould i do.

sign, Rosie