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This is a good poem.
Sad,but very good.

~Chelsea

Good. i dont think this is your best. the structure of the poem was uneven and didnt flow very well. i think your a very good writter and you can do so much better. but i loved the way you expressed your feelings and the emotion was great. i still give it a 5/5 because i can tell that you written it from the heart.<3

The stanzas were a little bit off but oh well and I think the reapeating line was good I think this poem overall was a wonderful write of your true feelings nice job!

Very sad. I like the emotion but here are some tips.

Too many ....'s It cuts off the flow severely.

Don't repeat words. It also makes it seem choppy.

Perhaps u are the one to blame, but dwelling on that will do u no good, and seeking to end ur life is a poor answer, a cowards answer, face what u have done wrong and fix it, what makes a good or bad person is the ability to learn from their mistakes and the willingness to change