Interesting.. very interesting. What exactly are you to blame for..

Hmm....

I liked it, sounds like some of my work when I was your age.

Beautiful poem.
The emotions/thoughts are just great.

God Bless!

This is a good poem, in which you said what you wanted so clearly.5/5 from me.

Well just common sense... i understand what this poem trying to sayl and i truly appreciate it though its not really clear i feel that its truely comes from the heart so for me u do a very nice job so keep on writing i know u cant write more

god bless!

Awww, I like this one. Heh. I can relate too. Nice job.

What are you to blame for hun? this is good

Perhaps u are the one to blame, but dwelling on that will do u no good, and seeking to end ur life is a poor answer, a cowards answer, face what u have done wrong and fix it, what makes a good or bad person is the ability to learn from their mistakes and the willingness to change

Very sad. I like the emotion but here are some tips.

Too many ....'s It cuts off the flow severely.

Don't repeat words. It also makes it seem choppy.

The stanzas were a little bit off but oh well and I think the reapeating line was good I think this poem overall was a wonderful write of your true feelings nice job!

Good. i dont think this is your best. the structure of the poem was uneven and didnt flow very well. i think your a very good writter and you can do so much better. but i loved the way you expressed your feelings and the emotion was great. i still give it a 5/5 because i can tell that you written it from the heart.<3

This is a good poem.
Sad,but very good.

~Chelsea