Comments : Illness ( ana and mia )

  • 18 years ago

    by XxxXLoveless_WristsXxxX

    Sweetheart, this is so sad! It made me want to cry! Especially the lines: Skin stretched over bones
    Like lollies in there wrapper
    Tastes so delightful
    To see such inner beauty
    And also these ones: Hipbones so distinct
    And collarbones of mass destruction
    Feeling so powerless
    Yet never had more control

    I can relate so much and remember I am here for you...I love you P.U.B x x

  • 18 years ago

    by HuggyQueenofCookies

    Please write more, you are so talented!!

    --ally

  • 18 years ago

    by XxxXLoveless_WristsXxxX

    This is really good...as I said before...

    You are such a great person, a talented poet and a great friend...and I really do hope we can work everything out!

    Keep writing...and I am still here for you no matter what

    x x x