Nice poem!Just one critique i saw:
but as i gaze as her picture i see this beauty
(But as i gaze AT her picture I see this Beauty)
It flowed well and there was a lil rhyme there! I enjoyed reading it! Keep up the GREAT work!
And
Keep Smiling

Much Love
-*-DK-*-
PS: Who is it? lol jking

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!! If I were you I'd scream out my poems and let everyone bow down to my i'l-sotalented-in-writing-poems-ness