WOW!! This was indeed a Very dark poem! I Loved it Like i love all of your poems! Again it flowed well...Liked the ending...and just everything in general! lol
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Hmm, this is a very interesting poem with a deep meaning. I really enjoyed the ending, I thought the rhyme pattern helped it to flow to. Great work 5/5

Superbly written piece. It has haunting atmosphere and you created it greatly. Imagery is also excellent. It really deserves 5/5