Oh dear....another beautiful sad poem....so emotions write..."Laying on the ground all battered and bruised, So full of pain and totally confused, Looking up to see that some do care, Appears a friend, who is always hovering there, Leave the corner, off the floor and on your feet, The emotional soul is there for you to meet, Search high, search low be assured they are there, Arms out stretched helping you up, full of love and care.

bert ~

"To represent the art deep in me"

That line was my fave.
You write beautifully!
5/5!!
*Gem*

Very nice poem, can relate the poem with grief and the way you have written it is cohesive and creative. Well penned and flowing. 5/5 all the way :)

Wow... that was so amazing i got like a perfect vision when i was reading this it was just wow.. speechless!

I love it!It flowed real nicely and I loved the word choice.5/5

<3Amber

It was totally different from the ones..yet it is awesome..i can see more rhyming and a good flow of words

keep it up!

I think that's one of your best...it's lines really got me...great job! :)

You did amazing job with rhyming, it adds so much effect to the rhythm of this piece. It is also very emotional poem, and you described every feeling on the excellent way. I love the way that you wrote this, it is filed with strong emotions and sadness. Last line totally impressed me.

This is fantastic! 5/5

I love it
5/5
keep up the good work