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  • 17 years ago

    by Shae

    Once again, Great poem!! I couldn't choose only one part. It was all great! 5/5

    ~Shae

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Awwww!!! if only every boy in american new how to write sweet literature like you it was absolutly amazing!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Soraya Lowe

    Aww! How adorable! I loved it...it was very nice. Great job!

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a really sweet poem David. I think any girl would be lucky to have you in their life. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 17 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Very beautiful 5/5