Victoria

by lost and incomplete   Sep 17, 2006


I loved her she loved me,
but her love was fake,
mine as true as can be.

we had happy and sad times,
but i loved her all the same,
i wrote poetry lines and lines,
but she thought they were lame.

we went out,
she ddidn't come,
then i found out,
she was with someone.

she made me laugh,
she made me cry,
she broke my heart,
made me die.

but now thanks to her,
i have a brand new heart,
ready to love,
and a fresh new start.

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  • 16 years ago

    by KaceyBelladonna

    If only some other people we know would stop trying to fix a relationship after a break up... and get on with life instead of making us suffer... kinda obvious who im talking about huh?

  • 17 years ago

    by LovinMyLife

    Love it! that was amazing! you are so good! keep up the awesome work!

  • 17 years ago

    by hippiehxc

    I've been through it. You expressed the way you felt better than I ever could. Well done.

    Love Grace.

  • 18 years ago

    by Raychil

    I really liked this poem. It was heart-felt. Story or a broken heart, yet you've overcome it and are ready to face the world again. I loved it. I hope you keep writing, you have talent.

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