Awhh, that was so sad sweetie.. The words you used were really good though.. They described what you were trying to say well.. It's quite sad though.. Tehee, keep up the great work sweetie! 5/5

Very well done, i really like it, 5/5

Very sad poem indeed, thought provoking..

God Bless!

Im not very familiar with the specs of a tetractys, not that that matters! you've really captured great emotion in just a few words. great job.

I always have trouble doing Tetractys poems, you did a wonderful job 5/5

Hrrrmmm. I love it. Very nicely written for being your first one of this type. I enjoyed it your wording was very nice and it made the poem amazing. :]]