That poem was garbage I hate myself I continue to fail to make a good poem

Hey this is awsome
i really like it
its really good
=]
well done
keep up the good writing
love you xo

It's absolutely amazing..Keep writing.

X3Grace

This is a real good poem. why do you say that you arent good at poetry. you are the best ive read yet. congrats. keep up the good work. i wanna see more like this. but not the sadness. the happy is what i would like to see

Marcus, I loved this poem, and I will read more of them in time. I think this poem was really good, it showed emotion, and the flow was pretty good. Don't get yourself down, you have talent.
keep writing
xxxx

Omg, thats exactly how i feel. great poem. greatly expressed. keep it up!

I love it. You should actually rap your songs for someone. I believe you could make it pretty far.
Whittney

Very Interesting write..
Something different.
Very good choice of words.

Keep up the good Work!

Everyone deserves most of the things they get. Don't doubt. I liked this one, nice work.

Awe! im sure ur not all those things! chin up!!!
another great poem!

well done

Love
jacs
xxxx

You honestly don't know how many peoples' feelings you've just described here....sadly, its a feeling we all have been through and know to well, but I did enjoy your poem even though it was sad..I loved the flow of it and your style....SOrry if this is true and something or someone has caused you to feel so down....Great write though, you show your emotion so strongly! Thats great!
Krissey

Marcus, I don't understand why you
would think of yourself that way. You
have a wonderful talent and this poem
you have written here is the way a lot
of people feel a lot of times, including
myself. Don't try to be perfect, because no one is perfect. If anyone
say that their perfect they lie. I love
your poetry and I'm most gracious to
you for sharing it. Don't be so down
hun we all strive to be a great poet
and we all strive to find the good in
ourselves. Believe me when I say I
have been doing it everyday for the
past few months. I just wish that I
could learn from my own advice. keep
up the wonderful work darling.

5/5

Love
Letty

Hey, this poem's nice!!! it's not garbage marcus... it's sorrowful but turns out so inspiring at the end.. seriously, it's touching...

I really like this one, i can totally relate to it, as can so many others im guessing... i like the ending too... it's a happy ending!!! i think... right? smiling means happy, right? ohwell, good job!