Awww... Kersten i love this it was good. oh and thx 4 the comment on mine. i love yours i really dont read love poems but i think i just might start. i'm so sorry i only write lost love i only write whats in my heart or sometime but very offend i write different. but the only reason i write lost love poems is because the boy i most crushed my heart 2 peacies althought he really does love me but he doesn't tell anyone because hes afraid of geting made fun of. I'm popular and he is to but the #1 preps in my school cant be seen 2 geather and having fun or they wont be popular anymore and i dont want 2 be a prep so i told him to screw him self.. so im the best prep and i dont want to b so can u help me comment me back and let me know!!!!

sign, Rosie

Gorgeous =)
You have a great concept here, i rarely see poems on this subject and you pulled it off amazingly.
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

Pain comes with ones own understanding of love. with no pain there can be no love, with no love there can be no pain and the circle goes on. it was a little rough but the emotion showed through and with polish may shine even better.keep the pens ink from drying, peace