The poem wasn't really catchyy . it so plain you didn't really explain your emotions.

I liked this one. Nice work!!

-Jennifer.

Awwwww thats sooo good but verrrrrrry sad. im really sorry that happened.. thats verrry sad.. :( wel ne ways its a good poem. keep on writing
take care
luve angie

Thats so sad! omg...but great poem

Wow thats a good poem , pretty sad tho,, keep it up, some ppl are born with tradjety in their blood

Thats was kinda werid but yet ok

Really good poem. its really sad and i feel sorry for you, but i think uv expressed yourself very well.

It actually made me tear up which is a hard thing to do GREAT job i think its 1 of the best poems i've seen in a long time

Aw. Sweet poem. Keep it up. ;]