I thought this was awesome i loved it good job and thx for the comment u left on mine well thats all good job

keenan

This is awesome and thx for the comment on mine and this poem is very good after i was finished i was just staring at the screen my friend had to tell me i was finished lol very good job i loved it

keenan

I liked the poem, but if you want to improve it, you can add more poetic words to describe everything. Or you can leave it like that, and try it in the next poem. =)

Thanks for commenting on my poem. I'm glad you liked it.

XoXo
Gaby