Comments : A Raven and a Dove (part 2)

  • 18 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Oooooo Cj! I love it. Duh-arkkk :]
    The end was amazing!!

    Her lovely brave raven
    Will spread his dark wings,
    He will fly over the seven sea's,
    And hold her in his wings.
    Hoping that is not a dream
    How she wishes to be free
    She can not wait to be with him
    And they can fly away
    In the summer night breeze

    Mmhm!
    EXCELLENT!

    -CassAnDruh.

  • 18 years ago

    by Riley

    Its just as good as the first 5.0 to that one! i love the seven seas part,just like
    nothing-gold-can-say .