Its a good piece i work i think, but there's one tiny, tiny, tiny thing i think you should change. IN the forth stanza, i think you can write 'flaw' instead of 'flaws'. It will still make sense, plus it will keep a stronger flow. Other than that tiny, tiny, tiny little thing, i thik the poem was great. Love, depth, and a good use of wording...what's not to like?

Brad

So truly and deeply in love. You express yourself in that you leave no doubt in how you feel. Really nice poem Cimara...