I think your poem is great keep up the great work. *shay* (coud you look at sum of mine to.)

Great poem.. i really liked the way it's written..
take care..
luv,,
haya 3gab =]

P.S. could you look at some of my poems?

It was a great and deep poem.. i kinda got a touch of some kind of rhythm but im not really the best person to be looking for that... anywho it was an awesome poem and i enjoyed even tho it was sad. so sorry man. keep up the amazing writing skills that u got..

A.