Wow!
This poem is really good.. I love the way that you express how you fell... which is what p[poems are suppose to be about... lol anyways I love this poem its terrific keep up the good work

Sam

I really liked this. good work.

Wow! great poem! dis is really gd and emotional, ur a great writer! keep it up xxxxxxxxx

Ur poem is great. 5/5. i like the way it flows, and how emotional it is. keep writing.

Very Good, Well Written and you expressed you thought clearly but not bluntly, it could uses a little work, but over all it was a very good poem. it made me kind of.. irky, idk the right word.(good thing.. or bad depending on how u look at it)

anywayz 5/5

xx.Lauren

Thats great!! 5/5!
The best poems are those that you throw urself into.....and dig deep into ur soul and write wht comes! Keep it up!

Very well written, amazing, love the emotion behind it,great job

Lovely poem.
Dark.
I gave a 5.

I liked this bit:
lacking the strength to look at you again
your tears destroying me deep within
goodbye now, my memory fading with the wind
i will relapse once more, giving in to my sin

I don't know why. I just like it. Mmhm.

Take care,
N-G-C-S.

Thats really good :) you're rhyme is very safisticated

Awesome poem. I liked the ending
peace
anna soffe

I like it's really good

Wow

This is a very touching and moving write. You have painted a picture with your words that the reader is able to image.

sadaddy

This is really good. It had a wonderful rythm, and a, for lack of better word, "plot-lone" that you don't hear much about. Very nice.

That;s really good. I liked it a lot :D

Wow that is an awesome poem. i cant believe that came out of a guy. no offense but i have never read a poem for a guy that was so deep

You are a very deep boy. I like you.

Wow very touching hun you are a great writer xx

This is a good poem!! and the ending is powerful!!!
peace

I like this poem, i like the way you show your emotions which is what poems are all about, great work