by Skye Sep 18, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Lost in this world, |
by ajda
Great work the line "forgetting what it was like before my smile became a lie,' really stands out |
by ellewen
I love it~ But I have a little advice. On the third line down, I think the word here, should be changed to there because it rhymes more and it still makes sense. Just a little thing I would suggest. I still give it a 5! |