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5/5. Im sorry for your lost! Its hard to go through losses. I hope the best for you!

I can definitely see the meaning, but the flow is a little off, especially the last line of the first stanza. Maybe you could replace 'exactly' with 'just'? I don't know, it just seems like it has too many syllables.

The third stanza is really good, though. The first two lines really get the point across; that he's dead but was alive not long ago.

All in all, the flow could definitely be better. But good word choice for the most part, and the meaning is strong.

5/5

This was a very sad poem, but a very good dedication. A person's life is so very precious, to every person that they have touched as well. Well written poem.

Hey, i already voted n comment this poem before,n i once say again good poem

Wow what a sad poem I love how you express your feelings here the flow the rhyme and the rhythm of the poem was awesome I was amazed by this one this is definitely great

Geneross

Keep writting XD